4.1. What is writing?
Writing is a form of communication
that allows students to put their feelings and ideas on paper, to organize
their knowledge and beliefs into convincing arguments, and to convey meaning
through well-constructed text. In its most advanced form, written expression
can be as vivid as a work of art. As children learn the steps of writing, and
as they build new skills upon old, writing evolves from the first simple
sentences to elaborate stories and essays. Spelling, vocabulary, grammar, and
organization come together and grow together to help the student demonstrate
more advanced writing skills each year.
Writing is a medium of human communication that represents
language and emotion through the inscription or recording of signs and symbols.
In most languages, writing is a complement to speech or spoken language.
Writing is not a language but a form of technology that developed as tools
developed with human society. Within a language system, writing relies on many
of the same structures as speech, such as vocabulary, grammar and semantics,
with the added dependency of a system of signs or symbols. The result of
writing is generally called text, and the recipient of text is called a reader.
Motivations for writing include publication, storytelling, correspondence and
diary. Writing has been instrumental in keeping history, maintaining culture,
dissemination of knowledge through the media and the formation of legal
systems.
4.2. Five Key Components of Quality Writing
Focus : Is it clear what the paper is about? Is the writer's point of view
clearly stated? Does the writer convey the purpose of the writing task to the
audience? Does the writer stick
Content: Does the writer explain the main idea with
detail and facts? Are good examples used to support what has happened or what
is happening? Are there examples and detaails concrete, specific, and
believable? Does the writer convince the audience through his/her text?
Organization: Does the writer have a clear beginning, middle,
and end? Is each idea grouped into a paragraph in an orderly fashion? Do the
paragraphs have 5 - 8 sentences each in logical order? Are the transitions
between paragraphs and sentences smooth?
Style: Does the writer use strong words that are varied and interesting?
Are the words selected painting clear and vivid picture? Are there a variety of
sentence lengths and types?
Conventions: Are words spelled and capitalized correctly? Is the
punctuation correct? Are the sentences complete? Is there proper spacing?
4.3. Six components of writing by
Alive
Writing Alive’s comprehensive curriculum shows teachers how to
integrate ALL six components of writing into weekly writing lessons, ensuring
there are no gaps in skill instruction. As a result, schools do not need to
supplement instruction with other programs, saving them money and time.
Teachers have the tools they need to begin instruction immediately.
1. Structures of Language – With modeling and explicit
instruction, students learn to construct simple, compound, complex and
compound-complex sentence structures using colorful sentence component shapes.
As a result students communicate more clearly in speaking and writing and can
tackle reading higher level texts.
2. Grammar – Each Monday teachers instruct a new language, grammar
or writer’s craft skill engaging multiple learning channels. Throughout the
week that skill is practiced in daily speaking, writing, sentence styling and
revision. Grammar skills follow a prescribed scope and sequence at each grade
level.
3. Process – Instruction begins with the sentence, teaching it with
hands-on sentence shapes to help students understand the components and
importance of sentence structures in reading and writing. Students build their
writing to paragraphs, compositions, stories and essays. Teachers and students
follow Writing Alive’s Guided Interactive Writing Process weekly.
• Plan – Organize
ideas in planners.
• Verbally Rehearse
– Students rehearse their writing from their planners.
• Show Writing
Models and Set Goals – Set goals from the rubrics or checklists.
• Draft – Break
drafting into chunks; and share.
• Assess – Evaluate
goals using the rubric.
• Revise – Teach
revision lessons: students use revision strips independently.
• Edit – Correct
conventions using kinesthethic editing techniques.
• Write Final –
Students select one of three completed drafts to take to a final copy.
4. Modes and Genres – Teachers model how to analyze fiction and
nonfiction genres. Students organize their thoughts in brainstormers and
planners for narrative, informative, explanative, opinion, analytical and
argument writing. Since students learn to write from models, Writing Alive
provides weekly writing models, editorials and articles in the genres in which
they will write. Each week begins with a suggested mentor text. Students learn
to use their writing skills across the curriculum.
5. Traits – Daily Sentence Styling gives students opportunities to
master revision strategies that improve organization, ideas, content, word
choice, voice, fluency, style and conventions. Explicit instruction and models
equip students to personalize and improve the traits in their writing.
6. Assessment – Growth is intentional! Students view basic,
proficient and advanced writing models, set goals on diagnostic rubrics before
drafting and assess goals after drafting to guide their revision. Students
celebrate success as they graph their scores and take ownership of their
writing progress!
http://www.writingalive.com/All_Six_Components.html
4.4. Basic Modes of Writing:
• Creative Writing is to entertain the reader.
• Descriptive Writing is to describe a person, place, or event so
that the topic can be clearly seen in the reader's mind. The writer must use
vivid details that paint a picture for the reader.
• Expository Writing is to provide information such as an
explanation or directions.
• Narrative Writing is to describe an experience, event, or
sequence of events in the form of a story.
• Persuasive Writing is to
give an opinion and try to influence the reader's way of thinking with
supporting evidence.
4.4.1. Sub Categories:
Argumentative Writing: This form of persuasive writing has a
primary purpose of making a statement that the reader will disagree with, then
supporting the statement with specific details that will convince the reader of
the truth of the statement
Business Writing: This form of expository writing has a primary
purpose of communicating with others in the work place.
Comparison and Contrast Writing: This form of expository writing
has a primary purpose of showing the similarities and differences between two
subjects.
Expressive Writing: This form of creative writing has a primary
purpose of sharing thoughts, ideas, and feelings on the topic.
Informative Writing: This form of expository writing has a primary
purpose of providing information in a clear, concise manner.
Literary Response: This form of expository writing has a primary
purpose of providing a personal reaction to a piece of literature.
Personal Narrative Writing: This form of narrative writing has a
primary purpose of sharing an experience or event from the author's own life.
Poetry: This form of creative writing has a primary purpose of
imaginatively reflecting on a subject, idea, or event. This is usually done in
stanzas rather than paragraphs.
Process Writing: This form of expository writing has a primary
purpose of explaining the steps or procedure of something.
Reaction Writing: This form of expository writing has a primary
purpose of providing a personal response to something.
Research Writing: This
form of expository writing has a primary purpose of reporting new information
that has been learned by studying available resources.
Technical Writing: This form of expository writing has a primary
purpose of conveying technical information in a simple, no-nonsense manner.
4.4.2.Five Types of Writing
A writer’s style is a reflection of his or her personality,
unique voice, and way of approaching the audience and readers. However, every
piece writers write is for a specific purpose—for example, writers may want to
explain how something works or persuade people to agree with their point of
view. While there are as many writer's styles as there are writers, there are
only four general purposes that lead someone to write a piece, and these are
known as the four styles,
or types, of writing. Knowing all four different types of
writing and their usages is important for any writer.
Here are the four categories of writing and their
definitions:
1. Expository Writing: (Expository
writing explains or informs—it talks about a subject without giving opinions.)
Expository writing's main purpose is to explain. It is a
subject-oriented writing style, in which authors focus on telling you about a
given topic or subject without voicing their personal opinions. They furnish
you with relevant facts and figures but do not include their opinions. This is
one of the most common types of writing styles, which you always see in
textbooks and how-to articles. The author just tells you about a given subject,
such as how to do something.
Key Points:
·
Expository writing usually explains
something in a process.
·
Expository writing is often equipped
with facts and figures.
·
Expository writing is usually in a
logical order and sequence.
When You Would Use Expository Writing:
·
Textbook writing
·
How-to articles
·
Recipes
·
News stories (not including opinion or
editorial pieces)
·
Business, technical, or scientific
writing
Example: Many
people associate the taste of pumpkins with fall. In October, companies from
Starbucks to McDonalds roll out their pumpkin-flavored lattes and desserts.
Here is how to make an easy pumpkin pie using only five ingredients. First,
make sure you have all of the ingredients.
This is an example of expository writing because it is
explaining. In this case, you can already tell that the piece will be about how
to make a pumpkin pie.
Non-example: Everyone
knows that the best part about fall is all of the pumpkin-flavored desserts.
Pumpkin pie is the best fall treat because it is not only delicious but also
nutritious. Pumpkin is filled with vitamin A, which is essential for a healthy
immune system and good vision.
This is a non-example because several opinions are stated,
such as “Pumpkin pie is the best fall treat…” Although this excerpt contains a
fact about pumpkin containing vitamin A, that fact is used as evidence to
support the opinion. These opinions make this an example of persuasive writing.
2. Descriptive Writing: (Descriptive
writing focuses on communicating the details of a character, event, or place.)
Descriptive writing's main purpose is to describe. It is a
style of writing that focuses on describing a character, an event, or a place
in great detail. It can be poetic when the author takes the time to be very
specific in his or her descriptions.
Example: In good
descriptive writing, the author will not just say: “The vampire killed his
lover.”
He or she will change the sentence, focusing on more details
and descriptions, like: “The bloody, red-eyed vampire, sunk his rust-colored
teeth into the soft skin of his lover and ended her life."
Key Points:
·
It is often poetic in nature
·
It describes places, people, events,
situations, or locations in a highly-detailed manner.
·
The author visualizes what he or she
sees, hears, tastes, smells, and feels.
When You Would Use Descriptive Writing:
·
Poetry
·
Journal or diary writing
·
Nature writing
·
Descriptive passages in fiction
Example: The
iPhone 6 is unexpectedly light. While size of its screen is bigger than those
of the iPhones that came before, it is thinner, and its smooth, rounded body is
made of aluminum, stainless steel, and glass. The casing comes in a whitish
silver, gold, or a color the company calls “space gray,” the color of the lead
of a pencil, with darker gray accents.
This is an example it is describing aspects of the phone. It
includes details such as the size, weight, and material.
Non-example: So you
just brought home a shiny new Smartphone with a smooth glass screen the size of
your palm. The first thing you will want to do when purchasing a new cell is
buy a case. Cracking your screen is an awful feeling, and protection is
inexpensive when you compare it to the costs of a new phone.
Even though this example uses adjectives, you can tell that
this is not an example of descriptive writing because the purpose is not to
describe the phone—it’s to persuade you to buy a case.
3. Persuasive Writing: (Persuasive writing tries to bring
other people around to your point of view.)
Persuasive writing's main purpose is to persuade. Unlike
expository writing, persuasive writing contains the opinions and biases of the
author. To convince others to agree with the author's point of view, persuasive
writing contains justifications and reasons. It is often used in letters of
complaint, advertisements or commercials, affiliate marketing pitches, cover
letters, and newspaper opinion and editorial pieces.
Key Points:
·
Persuasive writing is equipped with
reasons, arguments, and justifications.
·
In persuasive writing, the author takes
a stand and asks you to agree with his or her point of view.
·
It often asks for readers to do
something about the situation (this is called a call-to-action).
When You Would Use Persuasive Writing:
·
Opinion and editorial newspaper pieces
·
Advertisements
·
Reviews (of books, music, movie,
restaurants, etc.)
·
Letter of recommendation
·
Letter of complaint
·
Cover letters
Example: Following
the 2012 Olympic Games hosted in London, the UK Trade and Investment department
reported a £9.9 billion boost to the economy. Although it is expensive to host
the Olympics, if done right, they can provide real jobs and economic growth. This
city should consider placing a bid to host the Olympics.
This is persuasive writing because the author has a
belief—that “this city should consider placing a bid to host the Olympics”—and
tries to convince others to agree.
Non-example: According
to legend, the Olympics were founded by Hercules. Now almost 100 countries
participate in the Games, with over two million people attending. So cities
from Boston to Hamburg begin considering their bid to be a host city more than
10 years in advance.
All of these statements are facts. Therefore it’s
expository. To be persuasive writing, you must have an opinion that you’re
trying to persuade people of—then, of course, you will support that opinion
with evidence.
4. Narrative Writing: (A narrative tells a story. There will
usually be characters and dialogue.)
Narrative writing's main purpose is to tell a story. The
author will create different characters and tell you what happens to them
(sometimes the author writes from the point of view of one of the characters—this
is known as first person narration). Novels, short stories, novellas, poetry,
and biographies can all fall in the narrative writing style. Simply, narrative
writing answers the question: “What happened then?”
Key Points:
·
In narrative writing, a person tells a
story or event.
·
Narrative writing has characters and
dialogue.
·
Narrative writing has definite and
logical beginnings, intervals, and endings.
·
Narrative writing often has situations
like actions, motivational events, and disputes or conflicts with their
eventual solutions.
Examples of When You Would Use Persuasive Writing:
·
Novels
·
Short stories
·
Novellas
·
Poetry
·
Autobiographies or biographies
·
Anecdotes
·
Oral histories
Example: “I don’t
think that’s a good idea,” said Jaelyn.
“You never used to be such a girl!” retorted Orin, pushing
open the door.
Reluctantly, Jaelyn followed.
This is a narrative because it’s telling a story. There are
different characters conversing, and a plot is unravelling.
Non-example: Cutting
Edge Haunted House holds the Guinness World Record for the largest haunted
house on earth. It’s located in a district in Fort Worth, Texas known as
"Hell's Half Acre" in a century-old abandoned meat-packing plant. The
haunted house takes an hour to complete, winding through horrific scenes incorporating
the factory's original meat-packing equipment.
While this would serve as a worthy setting for a story, it
would need a plot before it could be called a narrative.
4. Imaginative Writing: (writing that
expresses ideas and thoughts in an imaginative way.)
Definition of
Creative/Imaginative Writing: The definition of creative writing is writing
that expresses ideas and thoughts in an imaginative way. The writer gets to
express feelings and emotions instead of just presenting the facts.
Creative Writing:
Ideas and Imagination
The best way to define
creative writing is to give a list of things that are and that are not
considered creative writing. Things that are would be: novels, poems, epics,
short stories, screenplays, songs, television scripts, etc.
Things that are
usually not creative writing include: academic writing, textbooks, journalism,
and technical writing
Your creative juices
flow when you engage in creative writing. The majority of writing, by far, is
creative writing. Not only can it be a creative outlet, but creative writing
can be therapeutic as well. Many psychologists recommend creative writing to
express feelings and perhaps examine them. In creative writing, you can use
your imagination and pretend anything you want and help the reader to do the
same.
Creative writing is writing that
expresses the writer's thoughts and feelings in an imaginative, often unique,
and poetic way. Creative writing is guided more by the writer's need to
express feelings and ideas than by restrictive demands of factual and
logical progression of expository writing.
Characteristics of imaginative
writing:
1. Clarity: It doesn’t confuse people. (This sounds so obvious, but you’d be surprised at the number of writers who think they have to be clever or coy or literary which just leaves the reader in the dark.)
2. Form: It has a beginning, a middle and an ending. The beginning draws readers in and the ending is satisfying. This holds true for fiction, memoir, personal essays, autobiographies, and stories for kids. Occasionally a writer who’s a genius ignores this,but most of us aren’t geniuses and can’t ignore it.
3. Emotion: It’s emotionally charged and the reader cares what happens to the protagonist. We either cry or laugh or are scared or feel something.
4. Meaning and connection: It’s about people or situations the reader can connect to. Either a story we enter into with the author for entertainment, or a subject or emotion that we too are dealing with or want to learn about, or can find humor in. It is not a story about the author gazing at his or her belly button. In some way the writing connects to the rest of the world.
5. Language: The author cares deeply about words and their power.No overblown adjectives or adverbs (and only those absolutely necessary for information.)No flabby cliches. The author loves language and hones and rewrites every sentence.
1. Clarity: It doesn’t confuse people. (This sounds so obvious, but you’d be surprised at the number of writers who think they have to be clever or coy or literary which just leaves the reader in the dark.)
2. Form: It has a beginning, a middle and an ending. The beginning draws readers in and the ending is satisfying. This holds true for fiction, memoir, personal essays, autobiographies, and stories for kids. Occasionally a writer who’s a genius ignores this,but most of us aren’t geniuses and can’t ignore it.
3. Emotion: It’s emotionally charged and the reader cares what happens to the protagonist. We either cry or laugh or are scared or feel something.
4. Meaning and connection: It’s about people or situations the reader can connect to. Either a story we enter into with the author for entertainment, or a subject or emotion that we too are dealing with or want to learn about, or can find humor in. It is not a story about the author gazing at his or her belly button. In some way the writing connects to the rest of the world.
5. Language: The author cares deeply about words and their power.No overblown adjectives or adverbs (and only those absolutely necessary for information.)No flabby cliches. The author loves language and hones and rewrites every sentence.
Forms of Texts:
* Short stories
* Poems
* Letters to self (future/past)
* Letters to others
* Scripts
* Diary entries
* Interior monolgues
* Prologues/Epilogues
* Speeches
* Autobiography, etc.
* Short stories
* Poems
* Letters to self (future/past)
* Letters to others
* Scripts
* Diary entries
* Interior monolgues
* Prologues/Epilogues
* Speeches
* Autobiography, etc.
Examples of Creative Writing: This kind of
writing entertains the reader and there are many places where you can find it.
Examples need to be included in any definition of creative writing. Following are some of the forms and examples.
Poems are great examples of creative
writing. Here is an excerpt from Lewis Carroll’s “The Walrus and the
Carpenter" from Through the Looking-Glass.
"If seven maids with seven mopsSwept
it for half a year.Do you suppose," the Walrus said,"That they could
get it clear?""I doubt it," said the Carpenter,And shed a bitter
tear.
Short stories can be narrative, funny,
mysterious, satirical, fantasy, or historical. Aesop’s Fables are very short
stories that include a lesson for the reader. Here is the “Hare and the
Tortoise.”
A Hare one day ridiculed the short feet and
slow pace of the Tortoise, who replied, laughing: "Though you be swift as
the wind, I will beat you in a race." The Hare, believing her assertion to
be simply impossible, assented to the proposal; and they agreed that the Fox
should choose the course and fix the goal. On the day appointed for the race
the two started together. The Tortoise never for a moment stopped, but went on
with a slow but steady pace straight to the end of the course. The Hare, lying
down by the wayside, fell fast asleep. At last waking up, and moving as fast as
he could, he saw the Tortoise had reached the goal, and was comfortably dozing
after her fatigue. The moral is: Slow
but steady wins the race.
Story Starters
Want to try your hand at it or sharpen your
writing skills? Some things that can help you get started are:
Imagine that..
Have you ever wondered ...
Pretend that ...
What if ...
A funny thing happened...
Why do you think that ...
Once upon a time ...
It was a dark and stormy night ...
Creative writing is the very fine art of making things
up, in the most attractive, apt and convincing way possible. It's the telling
of lies in order to reveal illuminating and dark truths about the world and our
place in it. We tend to think of Poetry, Fiction and Plays.
These are the five
different types of writing that
are generally used. There are many sub-types of writing that may fall in any of
those categories. A writer must know all these styles in order to identify the
purpose of his or her own writing and make sure it's something the audience
wants to read.
4.5. Sub skills of writing: There are four sub skills of writing
·
Mechanical Skills
·
Grammatical Skills
·
Judgement Skills
·
Discourse Skills
Writing is one of the most demanding skills. It has to
be deliberately cultivated. It is not something natural to human
beings like that of listening and speaking. It is a skill that has
been developed in civilized society to pass on knowledge or messages. Writing aims
at clear and efficient communication. Anne Raimes (1983) has
diagrammatically represented writing and its sub- skills as follows –
The above
diagram clearly illustrates the complex of sub-skills that make a piece of
writing coherent, effective and communicative.
1. Mechanical Skills: Mechanical skills involve handwriting, spelling
and punctuation marks.
Handwriting
The first step in writing is the development of the manipulative
or mechanical skill of forming letter of the alphabets
F.G.French points out that the first step in teaching of writing
is penmanship, training in simple handwriting.
ü Handwriting
skills includes
o
Proper strokes
o
Shape of letters
o
Right size of letters
o
Proper spacing
Spelling: Good
spelling is a mark of good education it comes about through practice and
plentiful opportunities to learn words.
o
Same letter with different sounds
E,g: C sounds gives |s| in
‘receive’
Punctuations: Punctuation marks are like road signals.
They tell us where to slow down, where to stop and so on.
ü To help the
reader understand the text.
ü To clarify
the grammatical structures.
The mechanics of writing
Developing the skill of writing is an important factor in teaching
of foreign language. Writing should be introduced after word
recognition exercises. Writing skill reinforces oral and reading
work. The language items already learnt become fixed in the minds of
students. Writing provides a change of activity and enables the
students to do some homework. At later stage the ability to write in
English is needed in offices, because English continues to be the language of
administration at the Central level.
Effective writing requires a sound understanding of the mechanics
of good writing. A useful example in thinking about the mechanics of writing is
that of driving a car. Important information includes
- the various
components of the car (or parts of speech in writing), and how they
function together (the rules of grammar), and
- what is needed to
keep the car moving along, stopping and starting in the right places, and
pausing whenever it is necessary (punctuation).
The basic element of writing is the word. The first important
thing to recognize is that there are several types of words used in written and
spoken speech, each with its defining characteristics and its specific
purposes.
Punctuation : A well
written piece of work must have good punctuation. By learning to use different
forms of punctuation one can communicate and express his ideas and arguments
more clearly.
General principles
The following seven points of style can be useful in the
preparation of any piece of written work.
1. Be clear - In general, keep
sentences short and convey a single point in each sentence
2. Be concise – As for as
possible, use shorter words and phrases
3. Enjoy precision- Effective
writing is writing that says precisely what the writer means and
means precisely
what the writer intended.
4. Be consistent - Use terms
consistently throughout the essay or report
5. Be accurate - State
measurements using the correct notations and symbols
6. Check disciplinary
expectations - Different styles of writing are used in different disciplines. A
piece of
written work that is about a technical subject or a laboratory report in a
scientific discipline is very
different in style from a sociology or fine arts essay.
7. Be honest - Reference all
sources of information
Mechanical Skills
ü
Avoid the use of slang words
ü
Try not to use abbreviations
ü
Steer away from the use of symbols (&)
ü
Clichés should be avoided.
ü
Brackets are used to play down words or phrases
ü
Dashes are generally used for emphasis
ü
Great care should ALWAYS be taken to spell the names of people and
companies correctly
ü
Numbers should be expressed as words when the number is less than
10 or is used to start a sentence.
ü
Quotation marks should be placed around any directly quoted speech
or text and around titles of publications.
ü
Keep sentences short
2. Grammatical Skills
·
Discourse
skills
A paragraph is not a list of unrelated
sentences. The lexical and the grammatical links are referred to as cohesion
and the logical links, coherence.
·
Grammatical
cohesion: This shows the grammatical
relationship between sentences or sentence elements in a text.
Writing is very powerful. The power comes from its potential as an
efficient and effective means of communication. The power is derived from order
and clarity. Structure is used to present the information so that it is more
accessible to the reader. We have to provide the information in small
manageable chunks, and to use the structure of the document to maintain the
context.
Considering the aim of reading and the reader, the document is
broken down into distinct sections, which can be written (and read)
separately. These sections are then further decomposed into subsections (and
sub-subsections) until we arrive at simple, small units of information - which
are expressed as a paragraph, or a diagram. Every paragraph in
the document should justify itself. It should serve a purpose, or be removed. A
paragraph should convey a single idea. There should be a statement of that key
idea and it should have the following:
- a development of
the idea
- an explanation or
analogy
- an illustration
- support with
evidence
- contextual links
to reinforce the structure
Draft, Revise and Edit : When we
have decided what to say, to whom to say, and how to structure it we must then
check it for clarity and effectiveness.
Layout: The main difference between written and
verbal communication is that the reader can choose and re-read the various
sections, whereas the listener receives information in the sequence determined
by the speaker. Layout should be used to make the structure plain, and more
effective. It acts as a guide to the reader. The key to effective layout is to
use -
- informative titles
- white space
- variety
Another way to make a point obvious is to use a different
font.
Style: People do not have the time to enjoy a florid phrase or incessant illiteration. They want to know what the document is about and what it says. In some articles a summary can be obtained by reading the first sentence of each paragraph. The remainder of each paragraph is simply an expansion or explanation of the initial sentence.
Punctuation: Punctuation is used to clarify meaning and to highlight structure. It can also remove ambiguity.
Style: People do not have the time to enjoy a florid phrase or incessant illiteration. They want to know what the document is about and what it says. In some articles a summary can be obtained by reading the first sentence of each paragraph. The remainder of each paragraph is simply an expansion or explanation of the initial sentence.
Punctuation: Punctuation is used to clarify meaning and to highlight structure. It can also remove ambiguity.
Spelling : For some, spelling is a constant
problem. Incorrect spelling distracts the reader and detracts from the
authority of the author. Computer spell-checking programmes provide great
assistance, especially when supported by a good dictionary.
Sentence Length: Avoid long sentences. We tend to
associate "unit of information" with "a sentence".
3. Judgement Skills: Judgment skills are termed as higher order
skills.
ü Style
ü Register
ü Organization
ü Relevance
Judgement
skills are also discourse skills, but they are of a higher
order. Judgement skills include style, register, relevance and
organization. They are so called because they involve, choice of
language that suits the purpose, which is a matter of judgement. In
the following two grammatically correct sentences – I gave Vinoth money to pay
his fees.
I gave Vinoth money so that he could pay his fees.
The
second sentence is stylistically a neat sentence and therefore it is
preferable. Such stylistic choices are to be used in our writing.
The
language of speaking should not be mixed with writing. Such words as
Cop (Policeman) that occur in speech should be avoided in
writing. This is a matter of Register that is the
choice of language that suits the written medium. Register is also a
matter of choosing language that suits the subject. The employment
of relevant material in writing and the organization of ideas or details form
the judgment skills.
4. Discourse Skill
“Discourse means ‘pieces of language longer than a sentence.” Some
words and expressions are used to show how discourse is constructed. They can
show the connection between what a speaker is saying and what has already been
said or what is being said.
Therefore, discourse markers are words or phrases that function to
signal how the current utterance relates to prior discourse contributing to the
meaning of the message. They are best realized by being used at the beginning
of clauses. In view of that, a preliminary list of discourse markers can be
specified, in terms of their functions, as follows:
1. Focusing
And Linking: With reference to, Speaking/Talking
of/about, Regarding, As regards, With regard to, With respect to, In regard to,
As to, As for
2. Contrasts:
- Direct Contrast: However, Nevertheless, Mind you, Yet/Still/In spite
of, Conversely, In contrast/In
contrast to
- Concession and Counter Argument: It is true, Of course, If, May, But,
However, Even so, Nevertheless, Nonetheless, All the same, Still
- Contradicting: On the contrary
- Balancing Contrasting Points: While, On the other hand, Whereas
- Dismissal of Previous Discourse: Anyway, At least, At any rate
3. Similarity:
Similarly, In the same way, Likewise, By the same token
4. Change of Subject:
By the way, Incidentally, Right, Now, O.K
5. Structuring:
First(ly), First of all, Second(ly), Third(ly), Lastly, Finally,
To begin with, To start with, In the first/second/third place,
For one thing, For another thing.
6. Adding:
Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as that, On top of
that, Another thing, What is more, Besides, In any case, Also.
7. Generalizing:
On the whole, In general, In all/most/many/some cases, Broadly
speaking, By and large, To a great extent, Apart from, Except for....
8. Exemplification:
For instance, For example, In particular, Such as, e.g.
9. Logical Consequence: Thus,
Hence, Accordingly, Therefore, As a result, Consequently, So, Then, That’s why
10. Making Things
Clear / Softening and Correcting: I mean, Actually, That is to
say, In other words, I think, I feel, I reckon, I guess, In my view/opinion,
Apparently, So to speak, More or less, Sort of, Kind of, Well, Really, At
least, I am afraid, I suppose
11. Gaining Time:
Let me see, Let’s see, Well, You know, I don’t know,
4. 6. Characteristics of Good Handwriting : The
following are the characteristics of good handwriting:
1. Letter Style: There are three different styles of
letters viz.,
(1) slanting towards the left,
(2) vertical,
(3) slanting towards the right.
These angles of writing are shown below:
1. Slanting towards
left
2. Vertical
3. Slanting towards
right
Generally
girls tend to adopt the first style and boys the third while the vertical style
is common to both. The teacher must ensure that the pupils adopt one
style only and do not mix them in their written work because it will make their
handwriting shabby. They may adopt any of the three letter
styles. The vertical letters are the best. Students
should be helped to cultivate the habit of writing in this style.
2. Legibility: In
order to secure legibility in writing, the teacher should pay special attention
to the different aspects of the cursive writing –
- letter-formation,
regularity of slant,
- quality of line or
stroke,
- alignment, and
spacing.
Studies have shown that pupils generally do not write properly
five letters – a, e, r, t and f. The
teacher should pay special attention to these letters as well as other letters
which the pupils do not write properly. Legibility is of great
importance. Good letter-formation is essential for
legibility. The chief errors in letter formation which make
handwriting illegible are -
·
difficulty in dotting i
·
difficulty in crossing t
·
top stroke short as in h
·
failure to close letters, as in a and o.
3. Uniformity: Good handwriting is
always uniform in style. Whatever style the individual writer
adopts, it should be uniform in size, spacing and alignment. In good
handwriting, all letters are written either in vertical style or in forward
slant or in backward slant. Any style is good provided it is uniform
in style.
4. Spacing: Spacing adds beauty to
handwriting. The letters in words and words in sentences should be
properly spaced. Similarly lines on a page should not be unevenly
close to each other. Proper spacing of letters, words and lines is
essential for good handwriting.
5. Distinctiveness Each letter should have
a characteristic form of its own. Letters should be written clearly
and carefully. The letters should not have resemblance with some
other letters.
6. Simplicity: The letters should be
simple. A simple handwriting in which letters have no unnecessary
tails or loops is always easy to read. Simple letter shapes carry
more appeal.
7. Appropriate Size of Letters: The
size of letters should be moderate and even. These should be neither
small nor big. There should be proportion between the size of
letters. They should have due proportion to one another.
8. Speed: Good handwriting also
requires a reasonable speed. It adds charm and fluency to one’s
writing. “The writing should not be laboured but done at reasonable speed”–
A.W. Frisby. In the beginning the pupils should write slowly but
they can cultivate the habit of writing beautifully at reasonable speed in due
course.
4.7. Developing Good Handwriting:
Bad handwriting is a wrong habit. Once the bad habit of writing is
formed it becomes difficult to get it removed and replace it with the habit of
good writing. The following are the remedial measures for improving
handwriting -
1. Use of Four-line Notebooks: The use of four line
notebooks will be extremely useful. If proper attention is paid by
the teacher to the size and spacing of letters, four-line notebooks result in
good handwriting.
2. Teacher’s Handwriting
as Model: The teacher’s handwriting should be model for the
students. When he is writing on the blackboard the students should
be asked to watch his movements of hand and fingers. The pupils should be
made to understand proper strokes, uniform size and proper
spacing. Teacher’s writing becomes a model for the students.
3. Individual Attention: The student’s posture while writing
should be attended to. They should sit comfortably in their seats in
an erect-position, with both feet resting on the ground and their bodies
leaning slightly forward from the hips, but not touching the
desk. Head should bend twelve inches away from the paper.
4. Use of Proper Writing Material: The use of proper writing
material at different stage of writing is an important
consideration. Students should be directed to use proper writing
material.
5. Sympathetic Treatment: The student with bad handwriting
should be treated sympathetically. He may be asked to do a page of
writing every day.
6. Adequate Practice: Adequate practice in writing should be
given to students.
7. Handwriting Competition: There should be frequent
competitions on handwriting. Good handwriting of students should be
displayed in the classroom.
As a remedial measure for improvement of handwriting adequate
exercise in writing such as transcription, dictation and composition should be
given to the students. It is only through a well planned practice
the students can improve their handwriting.
4.8. Writing
Assessments: What does it mean to assess writing?
Assessment is the gathering of information
about student learning. It can be used for formative purposes−−to adjust
instruction−−or summative purposes: to render a judgment about the quality of
student work. It is a key instructional activity, and teachers engage in it
every day in a variety of informal and formal ways.
Assessment of student writing is a
process. Assessment of student writing and performance in the class should
occur at many different stages throughout the course and could come in many
different forms. At various points in the assessment process, teachers usually
take on different roles such as motivator, collaborator, critic, evaluator,
etc., (see Brooke Horvath for more on these roles) and give different types of
response.
One of the major purposes of writing
assessment is to provide feedback to students. We know that feedback is crucial
to writing development. The 2004 Harvard Study of Writing concluded,
"Feedback emerged as the hero and the anti-hero of our study−powerful
enough to convince students that they could or couldn't do the work in a given
field, to push them toward or away from selecting their majors, and
contributed, more than any other single factor, to students' sense of academic
belonging or alienation"
Source: Horvath, Brooke K. "The
Components of Written Response: A Practical Synthesis of Current
Views." Rhetoric Review 2 (January 1985): 136−56. Rpt. in
C Corbett, Edward P. J., Nancy Myers, and Gary Tate.
a. Validity and Reliability
Yancey traces the major shifts in writing assessment by pointing
toward each wave’s swing toward or away from the concepts of validity and
reliability. Peggy O’Neill, Cindy Moore, and Brian Huot explain in A Guide To
College Writing Assessment that reliability and validity are the most important
terms in discussing best practices in writing assessment
In the first wave of writing assessment, the emphasis is on
reliability: reliability confronts questions over the consistency of a test. In
this wave, the central concern was to assess writing with the best
predictability with the least amount of cost and work.
The shift toward the second wave marked a move toward considering
principles of validity. Validity confronts questions over a test’s
appropriateness and effectiveness for the given purpose. Methods in this wave
were more concerned with a test’s construct validity: whether the material
prompted from a test is an appropriate measure of what the test purports to
measure. Teachers began to see an incongruence between the material being
prompted to measure writing and the material teachers were asking students to
write. Holistic scoring, championed by Edward M. White, emerged in this wave.
It is one method of assessment where students’ writing is prompted to measure
their writing ability.
The third wave of writing assessment emerges with continued
interest in the validity of assessment methods. This wave began to consider an
expanded definition of validity that includes how portfolio assessment
contributes to learning and teaching. In this wave, portfolio assessment
emerges to emphasize theories and practices in Composition and Writing Studies
such as revision, drafting, and process.
b. Direct and Indirect Assessment
Indirect writing assessments typically consist of multiple choice
tests on grammar, usage, and vocabulary. Examples include high-stakes
standardized tests such as the ACT, SAT, and GRE, which are most often used by
colleges and universities for admissions purposes. Other indirect assessments,
such as Compass and Accuplacer, are used to place students into remedial or
mainstream writing courses. Direct writing assessments, like the timed essay
test, require at least one sample of student writing and are viewed by many
writing assessment scholars as more valid than indirect tests because they are
assessing actual samples of writing. Portfolio assessment, which generally
consists of several pieces of student writing written over the course of a
semester, began to replace timed essays during the late 1980s and early 1990s.
Portfolio assessment is viewed as being even more valid than timed essay tests
because it focuses on multiple samples of student writing that have been
composed in the authentic context of the classroom. Portfolios enable assessors
to examine multiple samples of student writing and multiple drafts of a single
essay.
c. Writing Assessment as Technology
Methods: Methods of writing assessment vary depending on the
context and type of assessment. The following is an incomplete list of writing
assessments frequently administered:
1. Portfolio: Portfolio assessment is typically used to assess
what students have learned at the end of a course or over a period of several
years. Course portfolios consist of multiple samples of student writing and a
reflective letter or essay in which students describe their writing and work
for the course. “Showcase portfolios” contain final drafts of student writing,
and “process portfolios” contain multiple drafts of each piece of writing. Both
print and electronic portfolios can be either showcase or process portfolios,
though electronic portfolios typically contain hyperlinks from the reflective
essay or letter to samples of student work and, sometimes, outside sources.
2. Timed-Essay: Timed essay tests were developed as an alternative
to multiple choice, indirect writing assessments. Timed essay tests are often
used to place students into writing courses appropriate for their skill level.
These tests are usually proctored, meaning that testing takes place in a
specific location in which students are given a prompt to write in response to
within a set time limit. The SAT and GRE both contain timed essay portions.
3. Rubric: A rubric is a tool used in writing assessment that can
be used in several writing contexts. A rubric consists of a set of criteria or
descriptions that guides a rater to score or grade a writer. The origins of
rubrics can be traced to early attempts in education to standardize and scale
writing in the early 20th century. Ernest C Noyes argues in November 1912 for a
shift toward assessment practices that were more science-based. One of the
original scales used in education was developed by Milo B. Hillegas in A Scale
for the Measurement of Quality in English Composition by Young People. This
scale is commonly referred to as the Hillegas Scale. The Hillegas Scale and
other scales used in education were used by administrators to compare the
progress of schools.
4. Multiple-Choice Test: Multiple-choice tests contain questions
about usage, grammar, and vocabulary. Standardized tests like the SAT, ACT, and
GRE are typically used for college or graduate school admission. Other tests,
such as Compass and Accuplacer, are typically used to place students into
remedial or mainstream writing courses.
5. Automated Essay Scoring: Automated Essay Scoring (AES)
is the use of non-human, computer-assisted assessment practices to rate, score,
or grade writing tasks.
6. Race and Writing Assessment:
Some scholars in writing assessment focus their research on the
influence of race on the performance on writing assessments. Scholarship in
race and writing assessment seek to study how categories of race and
perceptions of race continues to shape writing assessment outcomes. However,
scholars in writing assessment recognize that racism in the 21st century is no longer
explicit, but point out that writing assessment practices are silently racist.
Nicholas Behm and Keith D. Miller in “Challenging the Frameworks of Color-Blind
Racism: Why We Need a Fourth Wave of Writing Assessment Scholarship” advocate
for the recognition of another wave after the three that Yancey offers. Behm
and Miller advocate for a wave where the intersections of race and writing
assessment are brought to the forefront of assessment practices. As the authors
explain, racial inequalities in writing assessment are typically justified with
non-racial reasons.
Be sure to know what you want students to
be able to do and why. Good assessment practices start with a pedagogically sound
assignment description and learning goals for the writing task at hand. The
type of feedback given on any task should depend on the learning goals you have
for students and the purpose of the assignment. Think early on about why you
want students to complete a given writing project (see guide to writing strong
assignments page). What do you want them to know? What do you want students to
be able to do? Why? How will you know when they have reached these goals? What
methods of assessment will allow you to see that students have accomplished
these goals (portfolio assessment assigning multiple drafts, rubric, etc)? What
will distinguish the strongest projects from the weakest?
Begin designing writing assignments with
your learning goals and methods of assessment in mind.
Plan and implement activities that support
students in meeting the learning goals. How will you support students in
meeting these goals? What writing activities will you allow time for? How can
you help students meet these learning goals?
Begin giving feedback early in the writing
process. Give
multiple types of feedback early in the writing process. For example, talking
with students about ideas, write written responses on drafts, have students
respond to their peers' drafts in process, etc. These are all ways for students
to receive feedback while they are still in the process of revising.
Structure opportunities for feedback at
various points in the writing process. Students should also have opportunities to
receive feedback on their writing at various stages in the writing process.
This does not mean that teachers need to respond to every draft of a writing
project. Structuring time for peer response and group workshops can be a very
effective way for students to receive feedback from other writers in the class
and for them to begin to learn to revise and edit their own writing.
Be open with students about your
expectations and
the purposes of the assignments. Students respond better to writing projects
when they understand why the project is important and what they can learn
through the process of completing it. Be explicit about your goals for them as
writers and why those goals are important to their learning. Additionally, talk
with students about methods of assessment. Some teachers have students help
collaboratively design rubrics for the grading of writing. Whatever methods of
assessment you choose, be sure to let students in on how they will be
evaluated.
Do not burden students with
excessive feedback. Our instinct as teachers, especially when we are really interested
in students´ writing is to offer as many comments and suggestions as we can.
However, providing too much feedback can leave students feeling daunted and
uncertain where to start in terms of revision. Try to choose one or two things
to focus on when responding to a draft. Offer students concrete possibilities
or strategies for revision.
Allow students to maintain control over
their paper. Instead
of acting as an editor, suggest options or open-ended alternatives the student
can choose for their revision path. Help students learn to assess their own
writing and the advice they get about it.
Purposes of Responding We provide different kinds of
response at different moments. But we might also fall into a kind of
"default" mode, working to get through the papers without making a
conscious choice about how and why we want to respond to a given assignment. So
it might be helpful to identify the two major kinds of response we provide:
- Formative Response: response that aims primarily to help
students develop their writing. Might focus on confidence-building, on
engaging the student in a conversation about her ideas or writing choices
so as to help student to see herself as a successful and promising writer.
Might focus on helping student develop a particular writing project, from
one draft to next. Or, might suggest to student some general skills she
could focus on developing over the course of a semester.
- Evaluative Response: response that focuses on evaluation of how
well a student has done. Might be related to a grade. Might be used
primarily on a final product or portfolio. Tends to emphasize whether or
not student has met the criteria operative for specific assignment and to
explain that judgment.
We respond to many kinds of writing and at
different stages in the process, from reading responses, to exercises, to
generation or brainstorming, to drafts, to source critiques, to final drafts.
It is also helpful to think of the various forms that response can take.
- Conferencing: verbal, interactive response. This might
happen in class or during scheduled sessions in offices. Conferencing can
be more dynamic: we can ask students questions about their work, modeling
a process of reflecting on and revising a piece of writing. Students can
also ask us questions and receive immediate feedback. Conference is
typically a formative response mechanism, but might also serve usefully to
convey evaluative response.
- Written Comments on Drafts
- Local: when we focus on "local" moments
in a piece of writing, we are calling attention to specifics in the paper.
Perhaps certain patterns of grammar or moments where the essay takes a
sudden, unexpected turn. We might also use local comments to emphasize a
powerful turn of phrase, or a compelling and well-developed moment in a
piece. Local commenting tends to happen in the margins, to call attention
to specific moments in the piece by highlighting them and explaining their
significance. We tend to use local commenting more often on drafts and
when doing formative response.
- Global: when we focus more on the overall piece of
writing and less on the specific moments in and of themselves. Global
comments tend to come at the end of a piece, in narrative-form response.
We might use these to step back and tell the writer what we learned
overall, or to comment on a pieces' general organizational structure or
focus. We tend to use these for evaluative response and often,
deliberately or not, as a means of justifying the grade we assigned.
- Rubrics: charts or grids on which we identify the
central requirements or goals of a specific project. Then, we evaluate
whether or not, and how effectively, students met those criteria. These
can be written with students as a means of helping them see and articulate
the goals a given project.
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